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Manipulation by MabelleArt Manipulation by MabelleArt
I was gonna throw the materials I used before but then this schoolwork came up and so yeaa comments and critiques much appreciated ^_^

Oh! this is also for :#feedback frenzy: I'm hoping that you can critique it on my skills, and artistic merits like creativity, originality, whether it's appealing etc Thanks!
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:iconmangafeelovesmangas:
MaNgaFeeLOVESmAngAs Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that's so cute!
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Thanks! :D
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:iconblazi76:
blazi76 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
the idea is cool but you could rotate image before upload :)
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Yea I should have thought it through ehehe
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:iconblazi76:
blazi76 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
You're welcome :w00t: You can always edit your deviations. It's cool by the way . really
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
Thanks! I'll do that as soon as possible :dummy:
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DButterfly1969 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
i like it. these dancers look really sweet. well done
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Thanks :)
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:iconcentralcitytower:
CentralCityTower Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
puppets, thats cool. you dont see many of those
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Thanks! ^-^
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:iconnocturnalscribbler:
nocturnalScribbler Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Figures:
> They're really creepy. Not sure if that was intentional, it's probably the poses and doll faces.
> The shading is really nice and gradual, I really like it.
> I like how the dolls are two different shapes as well.
> The curly hair on the one doll is so cute.

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> The thing at the top. Is it smiling? A nose? A mustache? I can't really tell, it looks somewhat like a cat version of Hitler or Charlie to me.
> I like the mixed media, the wood and lace especially.
> I can't really make out what's behind the red and white fabric. Is it supposed to be something?

Overall:
> It'd be nice if you rotated the picture before uploading.
> This is pretty cool but creepy. Like something from a movie.

Happy holidays :iconjackfrostplz:
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Thanks for the critique ^-^ I was kind of aiming for a cute but sort of creepy look
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knittywitty Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Hi there! I'm ~knittywitty, and I'm participating in #FeedbackFrenzy. You don't mind if I give a quick critique, do you?

First, I just want to let you know how creative this piece is. I love how you use different elements, like string, lace, and brick. I also like the originality of this artwork.

I think your presentation is lacking though. The picture is clearly sideways, which shows you didn't put a lot of effort in its appearance online. Also, you put this under the "miniatures" category. From the picture, I can't tell it's size. Finally, tell us more! What happened in school that made you create this? What does it depict?

Next time, I recommend you focus on the online process. When taking the picture, make sure to include a penny or button so we know the size. Once on the computer, make sure it's facing up and the subject is clear. And take the message underneath seriously! Tell us the what, the why, and anything else you think is important.
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Alright, I'll remember that for future projects, thanks for the critique! it was really helpful :)
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:iconknittywitty:
knittywitty Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
You're welcome! I'm trying to get better at critiquing.
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Oh! you should join one of those groups that critics the members' submissions, if you haven't~
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:iconknittywitty:
knittywitty Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I nearly joined #HumbleWriters but I couldn't make a commitment- sometimes I just don't have the time for it.
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Yea i know what you mean, I joined feature frenzy but ended up not making any critiques -.-"
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:iconnickkartha:
NickKartha Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great but... next time get a better cam XD
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
i knowww I definitely should upgrade from my phone camera hehe
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:iconnickkartha:
NickKartha Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Please do. There's a certain clarity requirement for all physical art pieces. It varies from 2 megapixels to a bag of weed.
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aradia1015 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Professional General Artist
lol yep thats what they do alright
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:iconprinz59:
prinz59 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist
it looks good . but sadly the picture is blured
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
thanks! and yea I'm TERRIBLE at photography
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:iconfarzanehlphl:
farzanehlphl Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
so cute ...
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
thanks! ^-^
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:iconkarusanchez:
karuSanchez Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Student General Artist
pretty cute!!!!
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Thanks! ^-^
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:iconunscenemedia:
unscenemedia Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Cool concept!
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
Thanks! ^-^
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ProfelisAurata Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great idea and nice realization! I like it! <3
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012
aww thanks! :)
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:iconladyariela:
LadyAriela Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is great--I love how all the components work together to create a sort of story-book feel to the piece. I love it!
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
Thank youu ^_^ and thanks too for checking out my other work :)
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Hayley-Phillips Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Student General Artist
This is really clever. I especially love the style of the two girls; it's kind of cartoony but it works!
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:iconmabelleart:
MabelleArt Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012
Thank you ^_^ glad you like it, check out my other artworks when you can :) hahaha
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